Revision envisioned

Narrative structure is not my strength.  I tend towards pastiche, but after awhile, that seems gimmicky.  Yet, in revising this one essay, I sensed that the traditional, chronological narrative ain’t-a-workin’.  I took a risk, saved a new file, and stared at it, moving highlighted paragraphs around on the screen.  Too confusing.  So I printed it out, busted out Post-It notes for the section headers, and began chopping away.

where the magic happens

with a little help from my friend

re-configured with headers

what happened when i left the room for a few minutes. (luckily i had already numbered everything.)

What can I say?  I’m a visual learner/thinker.  At least the essay is only 15 pages long.  If I ever write a book, I’ll need a bigger floor.

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5 thoughts on “Revision envisioned

    • This is how I wrote my favorite-all-time-paper on Riders to the Sea in college because I had a two-page works cited section for a 20 page paper and could not keep track of everything. But yes. Andrew, that dearheart.

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